8.28.2007

Losing the Light

You held my hand
and took away my heart
by letting go of them.

I'm in an indigo mood.

Stars getting dim,
I ache for them to sparkle again.

Night sky reaching out to me...
I'm searching for the moon.
I dearly hope I find it soon.

Left in the dark,
can I create a spark?
Wanting to forget
you're the fire
I wish to start.

1 comment:

  1. I am so thrilled that you are writing poetry, it's not even funny. It can be really helpful sometimes to express how you feel, lyrically, or metrically.

    I really enjoy the line you have for the indigo mood. It's a good synaesthesia, where you combine two alternate senses (in this case, you combine seeing a color with a feeling you may have.). You have the right idea. Colors really do express how we taste, touch, and hear things sometimes. Very pretty line, Ashley.

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